Making Memories Slice
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 Brand new design card for Making Memories Slice Machine  US $.99
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 Making Memories Slice Elite Brayer Roller Pink US $6.49
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A few items from Amazon
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Making Memories Slice Spatula, Blue $0.99 Slice spatula-. Making memories-slice spatula. Designed to fit into the slice cordless design cutter (not included) tool set (not included) this handy spatula makes it much easier to complete your projects without damaging your die-cuts or gluing your fingers. Colors: teal and black. Imported. Meets cpsia (consumer product safety improvement act) standards....... |
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Making Memories Slice Spatula, Pink $1.84 Making Memories - Slice Spatula - Pink... |
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Making Mem Slice Fabrique Spatula $5.99 Making Memories Slice is a portable digital cutting machine. Fabrique Spatula- Perfect for lifting your design cuts from the Slice glass mat. It has a soft comfortable grip and a specially designed pointed tip to aid you in your projects. Just slide the pointed tip under the cut out and lift carefully.... |
What can I do to make my poem better?
Opinions, advice, thoughts, what do you think it means? Favorite part?
Faded discolored white
Against your beautiful pail skin
Traced, outlining old memories
Leaving the deepest scars
For you got sliced open
Making dreams come real
Always seeing a rose
A rose dripping red
On to the grassy feilds
Red to the green
Standing out like
Haunting souls
Slicing through another life
Even the darkness nights
The killer red rose
It's red is a Satan red
Tainted with blood
Still stands out like a shinny bright star
For it's represting your life
With the black and the red
Showing pain, shame, and hate
The rose and its thorns grew to be the center of your life
Faded discolored white
Against your beautiful pale skin
Traced, outlining old memories
Leaving the deepest scars
A constant reminder sliced open
Making dreams come real
Always glimpsing a rose
Petals dripping red
On to the grassy field
Red to the green
Clasped together
Haunting souls
Slicing through another life
Even the darkness night
The killing rose
Its red is a Satan red
Tainted with bitter tears
Still glows like a shiny bright star
The flower represents your life
Mingling the stain of black and red
Pain, shame, and hate
The rose and its thorns
grew to be the center of your life...
I fixed the spelling and the grammar. Never use 'got' in a poem.
I think metaphors sound better than similes when juxtaposing something.
Not a bad attempt for a teen. Try to expand your vocabulary. Use a thesaurus, and read your poetry aloud in front of a mirror, or an audience. You will catch repetitious and clumsy phrasing that way.
Well done!